Tuesday, February 24, 2009
WHO SHOULD GET THE MONEY
I would use the money to send benetha off to medical school I would do that becase it has the best upside in all of the opsions. If they opened a liquer store then it may not make as much money as walter thought. All of the money that they get would also be used at one time. If they spend it on a house then thats it. They would still be living the same life as before. If the money goes to benetha then once she becomes a doctor thy could make money continuesly. If the family makes money contiuesly then they would be able to make th ten thousand dollars back. Tey would eventualy be able to buy a bigger house and possibly open up a liquor store.
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
The Wierd Man
I thought I had seen that man before. He had walked in every story that I was in today. He wore a long black leather jacket with a black shirt and black jeans. I couldn’t see his face because of his Yankee hats and the glasses that he was wearing.
I was walking down the street when all of a sudden I bumped into him and it was like he came out of nowhere. He smelled like a dead person and his hands were freezing cold. I had looked back at him after he bumped into me. It looked like he was walking into the old graveyard there was connected to the park. When I saw him I decided to follow him.
I was now a couple of feet behind him. He was walking slowly and it looked as if he was following some type of animal and almost looked like it was a cat. He turned and looked back and I quickly hid behind a tree. I creped my head around the tree and I could now clearly see that it was a rabbit. The weird man was following a little rabbit.
The rabbit turned a corner with the man right behind it. I kept on following when all of a sudden I hear a huge loud crash. I run around the corner and I see the rabbit lying almost as flat as a pancake. The weird thing is the man wasn’t there. It was like he had vanished in thin air.
I was walking down the street when all of a sudden I bumped into him and it was like he came out of nowhere. He smelled like a dead person and his hands were freezing cold. I had looked back at him after he bumped into me. It looked like he was walking into the old graveyard there was connected to the park. When I saw him I decided to follow him.
I was now a couple of feet behind him. He was walking slowly and it looked as if he was following some type of animal and almost looked like it was a cat. He turned and looked back and I quickly hid behind a tree. I creped my head around the tree and I could now clearly see that it was a rabbit. The weird man was following a little rabbit.
The rabbit turned a corner with the man right behind it. I kept on following when all of a sudden I hear a huge loud crash. I run around the corner and I see the rabbit lying almost as flat as a pancake. The weird thing is the man wasn’t there. It was like he had vanished in thin air.
Wednesday, February 11, 2009
Lit story
The Cabin was Deserted
By Brandon Plair
TOC
Ch1
Ch2
Ch3
Contents
Chapter 1.. 1
Into the Night. 1
Chapter 2.. 1
All Eyes on Me. 1
Chapter 3.. 2
Corpses. 2
Chapter 1
Into the Night
It was a cold and dark night in the old woods. I had decided that I wanted to go and check out the old deserted cabin that was in the dead center of the woods. As I was walking it felt as if somebody or something was following me but it must have been my mind playing tricks on me. I had walked uphill for about 15 minutes before I had got there and I was so tired that I felt that I was dead.
I was in front of the old wooden cabin. The grass was as dead as the old cemetery that it was built over. As walked to the steps I saw a little black cat running across the grass. There was something different about this cat like it knew who I was and what I was doing. I walked onto the first step and it felt like my leg was about to fall through. Now up all three stairs I was at the front door when now there was more than on cat I couldn’t tell exactly how many there were since all I saw were there dark red eyes as if they had been drowned in blood. The more I looked around me the more eyes I saw and the more scared I had got.
Chapter 2
All Eyes on Me
The wind started to pick up. I was tip toeing closer and closer to the door. My hand touched the freezing cold and rusted knob of the door when all of a sudden I hear something coming from the inside of the cabin it was like a person was inside walking around I walked backwards quietly and notice that the eyes of the cats are gone when all of a sudden a cat jumps up and makes a screeching sound. I had stepped on its tail unknowingly and when I turned around to see if the cat was okay I saw what looked like a mountain lion with red eyes like the cats looking straight at me.
I started to run back to the door of the cabin when I stepped over a something and it snapped in half like a tree branch. I made to the door and looked back and I saw what I had stepped on it wasn’t a tree branch it looked long enough to be the bone of a human. Also I noticed that whatever was out there wasn’t there any it was liked the mountain lion vanished. When I looked up at the old oak tree I saw a crow eating something. It looked to be a rat. I had made up my mind and decided to go inside of the cabin I tried to open the door but it wouldn’t budge. The crow had now flown over to the railing in front of the house. Like everything else I had saw tonight it too had the red eyes.
Chapter 3
Corpses
Itried for the door again and this time it opened. I was welcomed to the smell of embalming fluid and death. The smell made throw up in my mouth and I could taste the pizza that I had for dinner. The room was filled with dust and cobwebs. There was an old worn down yellow couch and a wooden table with a glass vase with dead flowers in them. Oddly there was a chair in the middle of the cabin facing the opposite direction of everything else. I knew that the chair had to be there for a reason so much that I could feel it like it was a force against me so I decided to go up to the chair. I got closer to the chair and that horrible smell got worse.
I was now at the chair and I could see that it had cast a shadow off of the wall it was a shadow of a person but there hadn’t been anyone who lived here in years. I started to twist the chair around when crash! The glass vase on the table shattered. I could now hear the crows outside crowing and the cats meowing. I reluctantly turned the chair and it was the lifeless pail body of a man but not the whole body. Both legs looked to be chopped off.
I bolted out of the house like a pro sprinter, I wasn’t stopping for anything. I was now out of the woods and I felt like I was being followed again. I would never go back into those woods again.
By Brandon Plair
TOC
Ch1
Ch2
Ch3
Contents
Chapter 1.. 1
Into the Night. 1
Chapter 2.. 1
All Eyes on Me. 1
Chapter 3.. 2
Corpses. 2
Chapter 1
Into the Night
It was a cold and dark night in the old woods. I had decided that I wanted to go and check out the old deserted cabin that was in the dead center of the woods. As I was walking it felt as if somebody or something was following me but it must have been my mind playing tricks on me. I had walked uphill for about 15 minutes before I had got there and I was so tired that I felt that I was dead.
I was in front of the old wooden cabin. The grass was as dead as the old cemetery that it was built over. As walked to the steps I saw a little black cat running across the grass. There was something different about this cat like it knew who I was and what I was doing. I walked onto the first step and it felt like my leg was about to fall through. Now up all three stairs I was at the front door when now there was more than on cat I couldn’t tell exactly how many there were since all I saw were there dark red eyes as if they had been drowned in blood. The more I looked around me the more eyes I saw and the more scared I had got.
Chapter 2
All Eyes on Me
The wind started to pick up. I was tip toeing closer and closer to the door. My hand touched the freezing cold and rusted knob of the door when all of a sudden I hear something coming from the inside of the cabin it was like a person was inside walking around I walked backwards quietly and notice that the eyes of the cats are gone when all of a sudden a cat jumps up and makes a screeching sound. I had stepped on its tail unknowingly and when I turned around to see if the cat was okay I saw what looked like a mountain lion with red eyes like the cats looking straight at me.
I started to run back to the door of the cabin when I stepped over a something and it snapped in half like a tree branch. I made to the door and looked back and I saw what I had stepped on it wasn’t a tree branch it looked long enough to be the bone of a human. Also I noticed that whatever was out there wasn’t there any it was liked the mountain lion vanished. When I looked up at the old oak tree I saw a crow eating something. It looked to be a rat. I had made up my mind and decided to go inside of the cabin I tried to open the door but it wouldn’t budge. The crow had now flown over to the railing in front of the house. Like everything else I had saw tonight it too had the red eyes.
Chapter 3
Corpses
Itried for the door again and this time it opened. I was welcomed to the smell of embalming fluid and death. The smell made throw up in my mouth and I could taste the pizza that I had for dinner. The room was filled with dust and cobwebs. There was an old worn down yellow couch and a wooden table with a glass vase with dead flowers in them. Oddly there was a chair in the middle of the cabin facing the opposite direction of everything else. I knew that the chair had to be there for a reason so much that I could feel it like it was a force against me so I decided to go up to the chair. I got closer to the chair and that horrible smell got worse.
I was now at the chair and I could see that it had cast a shadow off of the wall it was a shadow of a person but there hadn’t been anyone who lived here in years. I started to twist the chair around when crash! The glass vase on the table shattered. I could now hear the crows outside crowing and the cats meowing. I reluctantly turned the chair and it was the lifeless pail body of a man but not the whole body. Both legs looked to be chopped off.
I bolted out of the house like a pro sprinter, I wasn’t stopping for anything. I was now out of the woods and I felt like I was being followed again. I would never go back into those woods again.
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